Sep 202011

Panopticon by Steve McCafferyPanopticon Steve McCaffery

We now move forward to 1984, an auspicious year for the publication of Steve McCaffery’s Panopticon; the (fictional) year of the George Orwell novel and the (actual) year of Michel Foucault’s death.

At the heighth of the postmodernist cultural tendency, the narrative is exploded, there is no fixed point of reference. At times the structure of the book is subverted, with parallel streams running down parallel columnns or along a horizontal strip along the bottom of the pages. McCaffery is continuing to play with ideas of confusing the unitary narrative going back to earlier projects such as The Four Horsemen (sound poetry group) and the Toronto Research Group (see previous post). When the book comes closest to a standard linear narrative, it loops around descriptions of its own structure as a book, as the movie based on the book, as a game referred to as a movie in a book, and so forth.

The original idea of the Panopticon was a prison designed by Jeremy Bentham in the 18th Century wherein the prisoners would be watched from a central ‘all-seeing eye’ without knowing they were being watched. In the context of McCaffery’s book the metaphor seemingly reflects itself so the reader is both prisoner and guard (within the context of the book) as well as objective viewer from outside. He succeeds in transcending the medium to the point that the book does give rather the impression of being a piece of experimental film or theatre somehow. And yet simultaneously, the book creates a very confining paranoid space.

Chapter Seventeen of a book entitled Panopticon concludes with a sequence of brief utterances issued by the narrator to a nameless party. The latter has entered a study and replaced a book on a shelf. The book is entitled Summer Alibi. In the third brief utterance in this sequence the narrator recalls a similar occasion when she too had entered this same room to replace a letter on a rosewood escritoire. Prior to this entry she had bathed in preparation for an evening at the theatre. It is known (from the evidence of a newspaper advertisement described in detail by the narrator) that the title of the play is The Mark. Later, in a book entitled Panopticon, this same description will reappear. There, however, the play will be a film and entitled The Mark and the whole reference will appear as a cancellarium, printed in an exergual space described as being a cinematic screen in a book the same nameless party has written.

Start with the assertion that you never failed to locate, nor to execute, any of the following commands. Let the image of the bath persist and split a second time. Place the woman in the room and in the theatre. This time allow the man to walk away. Follow him until you reach the study door. Don’t bother to describe the room, just put him in it. Let him meet the other man. Don’t mention names. Allow them to leave the room and walk down into the street where a planned complication will occur. Finish the chapter. Switch off the machine. Now place the pen he will use equidistant between the two edges of the page where the two men have been left. Add the phrase “she was middle aged.” Now mention another room. Let one of the men go into it. Describe his hands. Describe specifically what the hands are doing. Let the two men walk a block or two before you stop them. Watch them carefully. When you bring them back to the study door make sure the door opens inwards (i.e. away from you) and that the hinged side has a long cracked edge. Now watch how he wipes his hands. Memorize where he puts the book. Note the shelf and the adjacent titles. Note the way he dries his hands and how he refolds the towel. Make sure he notices the cracked edge of the door. Force his eyes to follow the wall until they reach the place where you stand. Don’t let him see you. Move away at this point and start to type again. Describe his nose. Describe the marks on his cheek. Make sure there’s a new mirror in the bathroom. Make sure you delay him and bring him to the spot too late. Get him anxious. Leave him irritated. Make sure the coffee’s cold. Change the time. Set the action in a new place. Change the title. Change the focus of the lens. Tum the lights up to their brightest and shine them directly in his eyes. Repeat the phrase NOTHING NEW WILL OCCUR. Pull back his head by his hair. Keep the curtains closed. Show him the knife. Remove the coffee. Don’t let him smoke. Make sure the cup gets broken and that all the coffee spills on the floor. Don’t mention the time. Answer all his questions. Bring in a new cup. Now describe the room. Insert four new chairs in the scene you describe. Now change the title to Toallitas. Say it’s a film. Tell him that you have a part in it. Tell him it’s about a murder on board a boat. Then leave him alone in the room. Leave him wondering. Leave the lights on bright. Don’t take your eyes off him for a second. Change the title again then move the scene to a different place. Don’t let him see where he’s going. Place him on a bench in an open park at the east side of the city. Tell him it’s spring that’s been very sick and now he’s recovering. Now switch on the machine and record everything that follows. Use your own voice. Describe the ducks on the pond in the park. Tell him he’s going to be all right. Describe the bench he’s sitting on. Mention the plaque on it. Mention the words carved into it. Mention the trash can to the side. Now remain silent. Leave quietly. Don’t let him know that you’re gone. Go back to the study and watch the other man. Ask him all the questions you can think of that might relate to his movements over the past five days. Sit him in a chair with a high back. Focus the bright light on his eyes. Finish the sentence then let him move to the door. Force him to take up the pen and write some more. Tell the other man that he’s a woman. If he tries to shift the scene or mentions the strategic sections of the woman emerging delete him from your own story. Describe him in such a way that he’ll be dead. Put parentheses around the whole incident and leave quietly. Replace the entire paragraph with the phrase HIS BODY REMAINED MOTIONLESS AND A COLD LUMP CAME IN HER THROAT. If he writes he’s dead then shift the scene to the garden and replace the former line with the phrase HE’S MOVING QUIETLY TOWARDS THE GATE. Now you can drop the spoon. Don’t tell either of them about the contents of the letter. Finish it off with a brief history of the place. Polish off the room in a brief sentence. Describe the woman getting out of the bath. Change the title of the book to The Mind of Pauline Brain. Now watch carefully how the keys drop to his feet between his shoes. Don’t describe them. Look very carefully at his face. Now watch him pick up the spoon. Make him put it on the escritoire. Now make him pick up the key. Introduce a sudden noise that frightens him. Let him run to the door but make sure the door’s locked. Tell him a lie. Tell him you’ve just returned from a visit to a friend. Lie and say you’ve forgot the name. Don’t mention the movie. Stop the sentence just as he’s about to leave. Repeat the phrase I BELIEVE THE DOOR IS ALWAYS KEPT LOCKED. At this point the other man might ask you where the keys are. Tell him you’ve lost them. Make sure you freeze him and describe him in detail (facial features, mannerisms, family background. etc.) Describe your own return to the park. Now interrupt as many conversations as you can. Make sure that he’s watching you as you watch him. In the book describe him as a woman. It’s important to keep control of this surveillance scenario as long as you possibly can. Don’t worry that you can’t see, make sure, however, that when you can’t see that somebody else can. Now you can delete all reference to the spoon. Repeat the phrase NOTHING NEW WILL OCCUR. Now delete the second man. Remove the eighth, the sixteenth and the thirty ninth paragraphs. Return them to their files in the desk. Now take out the index file and check the possible descriptions. Pause from your typing to look at the man in the park. Switch off the taperecorder. Check that all books are back on the shelf. Now let him close his eyes. Let him get up from the bench and open them again. Let him walk towards you. Switch the scene suddenly to a year ago in the study. Take off the blindfold. Make him turn on the switch. Describe him in a position of abject terror. Tell him it’s all right. Make him walk across the floor to the window. Describe him looking out. Replace the blindfold as he reaches the final sentence. Describe him as writing rather than reading. Change the final sentence to something else. Make sure you keep it vague and ambiguous. Leave the body in the room. Now describe whatever you want. When you leave the room make sure the machine is switched off, the book is replaced on the shelf, that the light is out and the door locked. Check your watch as you leave. It should be precisely nine thirty seven.

Update: McCaffery’s Panopticon is being reprinted for availability in October 2011!

Tangentially related:
Panopticon (wikipedia)
Michel Foucault (wikipedia)

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